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I CANT LOOK HOW BAD THIS IS

EVEN FOR A FIRST TIME

fff he's supposed to be all surprised and his hair, tail, and foot is supposed to move. Yes don't point out the obvious flaws cause i know what i see but if you would like to critique please do xD...
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Critique by =Lussinis Mar 1, 2013, 4:51:54 PM
Okay, this nigger is here to help.

Everything looks fantastic, with the exception of that leg. The moving hind leg.

It looks as if the middle part of it is stretching out, when the part of the leg above it should be moving with it. Just a bit, though. Everything else looks great, though. I think another thing that bothers me is that muzzle. It's oddly shaped, in conparison to an actual canine's snout. But um, yeah. Also! Using more frames makes animation smoother, so I would suggest drawing some in-between frames to make it look good, not that it doesn't already.
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=PiIot Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist
Here have some tips from a loser like me:
For blink cycles, make sure you follow this rule.
1. Open eye
2. Semi open eye
3. Close
2. Semi open
It completes the cycle.
The more frames, the smoother the animation.
Photoscape is the best animating program, in my opinion.
It's free~
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*Hyperactive-Travis Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dah thank you :iconhandspazzplz:
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=PiIot Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist
No problem. ;;
I'm trying to animate a walk cycle, but with two characters. whyisthissohard ;u;
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*Hyperactive-Travis Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
x3
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=PiIot Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist
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I dunno, animating is a pain. ;;
my rough sketches are terrible ok
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*Hyperactive-Travis Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
noooo noo keep going i love it ^^!
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~Crazychivez Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
youll want to be more smoother and precise with your frames. dont fucking rush it.
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*Piecatlovely Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool!
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*Hyperactive-Travis Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank yew darlin <3 :3
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*Piecatlovely Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nyeehh
no problem yo
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